檢視雨村曲話/卷下/71 的原始碼

<p><span class="書名">譚曲雜劄</span>：『<span class="書名">玉環記</span>「隔紗窗日高花弄影」，改<span class="專名">元</span>劇<span class="專名">喬夢符</span>筆也。<span class="專名">喬</span><span class="書名">煞尾</span>末句云：「比及你見那負心薄倖，多管我一靈先到<span class="專名">洛陽</span>城。」此等語不但慘慼回環，抑且以之作收，力有萬鈞。今以混入<span class="書名">貓兒墜</span>中，急腔唱過，大減分數矣；而<span class="書名">尾聲</span>末句，則以「專聽春雷第一聲」收之，豈不村殺！然此記賓白及曲中佳處，亦能彷佛，非近時腳手。』</p>

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