檢視譚曲雜劄/16 的原始碼

<p><span class="專名">呂勤之</span>序彼中<span class="書名">蕉帕記</span>，有云：『<span class="專名">詞隱先生</span>之條令，<span class="專名">清遠道人</span>之才情。』又云：『<span class="專名">詞隱</span>取程於古詞，故示法嚴；<span class="專名">清遠</span>翻抽於<span class="專名">元</span>劇，故遣調俊。』又云：『詞忌組練而晦，白忌堆積駢偶而寬。』其語良當。<span class="專名">勤之</span>，<span class="專名">越</span>人，即所稱<span class="專名">蔚藍生</span>者也，頗嗜曲而亦見一斑者，故其語若此；乃其所校訂友人諸戲，殊少合作。即<span class="書名">蕉帕</span>一記，頗能不填塞；間露一二佳句，而每每苦穉；至尾必雙收，則<span class="專名">弋陽</span>之派，尤失正體也。雖譜<span class="書名">中原</span>有<span class="書名">雙煞</span>一體，然豈宜頻見？況煞句得兩，必無餘韻乎？</p>

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