檢視詞餘叢話/卷二/25 的原始碼

<p><span class="專名">程雨蒼</span>孝廉以時文名家，詞學<span class="專名">蘇</span>、<span class="專名">辛</span>，尤工長調。嘗館余家，談及<span class="專名">玉茗</span><span class="書名">四夢</span>，頗有微辭，謂：『先生得意者乃<span class="書名">牡丹亭</span>，而<span class="書名">驚夢</span>一齣，疵纇尤多。』余與辨論，遂逐句指斥。至『沉魚落雁鳥驚喧，羞花閉月花愁顫』，雨蒼以『魚雁』下單提『鳥』字、『花月』下單提『花』字，語落邊際。『閒凝眄，生生燕語明如剪，嚦嚦鶯聲溜滴圓。』以下二句主聽、說，與上三字不貫。此二條，余亦不能為先生附會也。昔先生指摘<span class="專名">鳳洲</span>文集，<span class="專名">鳳洲</span>聞之，笑曰：『<span class="專名">湯</span>生標塗吾文，異日亦必有標塗<span class="專名">湯</span>生之文者。』信然。</p>

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